Shimmer

Beach (Image : SC Vincent)

Sole observer watching by the shore, as

hopping and skipping towards the beach

in a race to get to him

many of Neptune’s and Ra’s children

move hop skip and jump creating colourful patterns

each one hoping they’ll get there first

racing bring smiles to all who see it

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    1. Cheers for taking a look.

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    1. Thanks for taking a look, Michnavs. Plenty of stuff written for #writephoto on the inkwell so feel free to check the other pieces out.

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  1. I lovely, joyful acrostic, Brian.

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  2. I looked up Ra, to understand the terminology. Thanks for enhancing my knowledge πŸ™‚

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    1. Glad you enjoyed the poem Reena. Took my cue from the Sun and the sea….

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  3. Love the wonderful reference to “Neptune and Ra’ children.” Great poem. Thank you😊

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    1. Cheers for taking a look Suzette!

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  4. Wonderful photo πŸ‘ Thank you for sharing!

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    1. Thanks, but the foto is c/o Sue @ #writephoto, i just provided the words!

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Inkdrop is freelance writer with a passion for exploring the intersections between nature, architecture, and artistic expression. With a background in computing, and writing – his pen name harks back to when he played around with rhymes and a fountain pen. Now joined by a selection of created photos from an acquired DSLR camera He shares insights with scribblers of all backgrounds. Outside of visiting museums and exploring the latest in exhibits , he enjoys walking through the countryside in pursuit of the next rainbow.