#writephoto #keep

from atop a hill
among the clouds
the watchmen look across the way
each window pointing a bow and arrow
fear instilled in those wearing the metal hats, for
up on the opposing battlements, another watchman is
looking, with their bow and arrow, waving back at them
9 responses to “Keep”
I like the duality of the watchers – they are both the same after all. Nice one.
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It takes two to make a war and neither find peace…
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I love the shape of the poem, as well as the words.
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Many thanks Mr Spaceman – plenty more like that on my pages – enjoy browsing.
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A real insight to the circle of war! ๐
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Cheers for taking a look.
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A pleasure ๐
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